From across the thin wall ⋆。゚☁︎。⋆。 ゚☾ ゚。⋆

Written by Tengku Aideed Amsyar

Posted on Sat, Feb 17, 2024 Thoughts

I quite by accident stumbled upon a short story. It was left by someone within the comment section of a YouTube video. I didn’t expect to find something of such quality. So, I liked it and I had to make ChatGPT write me some more. I really liked the way it’s written and till this day I never heard from the writer ever again. While this may come as unnatural to some (using AI and all), I just thought it’s interesting to hear the story from the other character’s point of view.

If you haven’t read the short story, make sure to read that first here:
Story from a YouTube Comment Section

Interesting story I found from a comment section of a YouTube video.

In the dense lattice of the city, where buildings press against one another like bodies in a crowd, my apartment stood as a mere sliver of space claimed from the crush. It was a place marked by its narrow confines, the air heavy with the sediment of lives layered through time. The walls, thin as parchment, whispered secrets of the past, carrying the weight of untold stories. Amidst this, my piano—a steadfast companion in my solitary existence—offered solace, a means to converse with the shadows.

Moving here was borne of necessity rather than desire; the apartment, with its peeling wallpaper and the persistent musk of decay, was hardly a sanctuary. Yet, it was the balcony that offered a reprieve, a fragile boundary between the private and the public, where the city's cacophony faded into a backdrop for my nocturnal reveries.

For years, I played to the night, my audience the moon and the indifferent expanse of the city. My music—a reflection of my own internal landscapes, fraught with melancholy and moments of fleeting beauty—was a solitary act, a balm for the solitude that clung to me like a second skin.

It was not until the rain came, dressing the city in its plaintive melody, that I felt the presence of another. Across the divide, a figure emerged on their balcony, a silhouette against the backdrop of the storm. In the privacy of our respective refuges, we shared a silent communion, bound by the intangible threads of music and the night.

The pieces I chose, laden with emotion and the complexity of human experience, spoke of longing, of loss, and of the delicate hope that persists in the face of despair. Chopin's Nocturne became a motif in our unspoken dialogue, its melancholic strains a mirror to our unseen connection.

One evening, as the last notes quivered in the air, I stepped out into the rain's gentle embrace. There, across the void, stood my neighbor, a silent witness to the soliloquies I had offered to the night. The recognition between us was immediate, a connection forged in the solitude of our shared experiences, in the understanding that sometimes, music is the only language that can articulate the depths of our souls.

His words, when they finally broke the silence, were a balm, an acknowledgment of the invisible ties that bound us. "I’ve never heard anyone play Chopin’s music as lovely as you do," he said, his voice a soft intrusion into the sanctity of our shared solitude. "It’s ethereal, truly."

In that moment, the world seemed to contract until it was nothing more than the space between us, a bridge made of rain and music and words left unspoken. "I’ve never had a neighbor that doesn’t get sick of my playing," I replied, the words a confession of the solace I had found in his silent audience.

Our conversation, brief as it was, unfolded with the tentative steps of strangers navigating the terrain of newfound connection. Each word, each question, was a careful exploration of the space we had created together, a space where vulnerability was met with understanding, where the pain of the past was acknowledged but not allowed to define us.

"Why is it you only play when it’s dark and rainy?" he asked, his curiosity a gentle probing into the ritual that had become our shared secret.

In that shared silence, punctuated only by the lingering resonance of Chopin and the soft patter of rain, our worlds, once held apart by the city's vast expanse, were drawn together in an ephemeral yet eternal moment. "Because that is when you are out here to listen," I had said, words that reached across the divide not just as an answer, but as an acknowledgment of the profound, invisible threads that had woven our solitary lives into a tapestry of unexpected companionship.

And in the quiet aftermath, as the notes faded into the night and the rain whispered its secrets to the pavement below, we stood, two souls adrift in the vast urban sea, anchored at last in the understanding that in our listening, we had been heard, forever changing the melody of our existence.

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